Separate names with a comma.
(Oops, i meant Potter, not Salrion)
*Random Slytherin kid runs in* Slytherin: Hey, lemme see that Kris kid, I heard Salrion beat the s*** out of him! Kris: *Turns around, pure hate...
Kris: Huh? *looks confused* Batty... Behaviour? Well what happened?
Kris; Dammit! *Runs over to Angie, but stumbles before he gets there.* F***. *Gets up again and runs to Angie* Hey! What's wrong?
Ya, it definately has the potential. It needs to be a bit more descriptive in some spots, like you said, but it could definately be a great book
Kris: *Turns to Angie* What happened?
(Lol Keyboard fail)
Kris|: *Turns to Angie? What happened?*
(Bump)
Thanks
Bump
(And I'm not gonna tell what spell that is, or what, but it's in the books And no, it's not an Unforgivable Curse)
(Oohh, I know supa-spells only healing spells, and the one that the Death Eater used on me)
Kris: Dammit! Where? MP: The side of your head. Don't touch it! Kris: *Moves hand towards ear* Where's my wand? MP: Oh, it's here *Opens up...
Kris: *Wakes up* Ahh, that really hurts! MP: *Come out of her room* Kris? You're awake? Kris: Ugh, yeah. But I feel like hell... MP: Well you look...
(Lily, I've been really distracted at school today, only thinking about this rp )
Kris: *Laying in a coma* (I have school soon, so i'll keep my character like this for a few hours. I'll be out of school in exactly 6 hours from now)
MP: *walks over to Kris* There, there dear, it's alright... I'm sure she'll come back...*
YAAAAY MR. CARTIER!!!
Kris: *Mumbles* An...gie...