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Lauryn: *Whispers* You think he's here, of all places? This is the same place his mom was imprisioned for like a year!
Lauryn: Yeah...
Lauryn: Well... Yeah.
Lauryn: *Apparates to the hospital wing* MP: Kris? Lauryn: No... Just me... I need to talk to Mrs. Granger. Is she awake? MP: Actually, yes. But...
Lauryn: ... Yeah. Let's go...
Lauryn: *A couple tears fall* Kris...
Lauryn: Dammit! Why did I have to leave him early this night?!
(scratch that)
(Oops, forgot to add, Lauryn apparated along with Rose)
Lauryn: No, no, nonononoooo... If I hadn't left him... *Tears up*
Lauryn: Yeah, I'm fine... But if they were looking for people who know Sal... Oh no....
Kris: *Asleep* *Shadows appear outside the window* ???: I'm sure this is the boys' dorm. ??? 2: Shut up, she should be here. *Window shatters*...
Lauryn: *Sees Sal* Whew.... That scared me. A lot.
Lauryn: *Sees Rose repairing the window* What happened? Where's Sal?! Did they...?
Lauryn: *Sneaks over to the Griffindor common room, uses the password learned from listening in on 2nd year Griffindors*
Kris: Lauryn, I'm going to bed... See you tomorrow. Lauryn: Ok, I'll go talk to Sal and Rose. *Changes to cat form* Hey, I did it! Kris: Great!...
Kris: <Everyone. Sal got out in time?>
Kris: Ok, it's getting a bit late. Later Owen. *Returns to Ravenclaw common room with Lauryn.*
(Lol Rose)
Lauryn: *Comes out from around the corner* Hey. I've seen you around before, I think... I think we have Defence together...