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Lauryn: We need to go. Now. Ravenclaw Common Room this time.
Lauryn: *Taps her neck lightly with the tip of the wand*
Lauryn: Rose, your neck is really dark! It's completely covered in bruises! *Sparks a little magic at the tip of her wand* Here, this'll sting for...
(Not that we should've let him die, but "That's the last time I save your damn life!" I (or Lauryn) have said it at least 3 times...)
(Lily, I've said that 3 times now)
Lauryn: Rose! Are you all right?
(Damn, I'll need to remember that if Jacob brings it up again...)
(Noooo, don't leave, Jacob!)
Lauryn: JACOB! Calm DOWN. Now.
(You'll see)
(I just realized I can make this end hilariously)
Lauryn: *DA coin burns* Rose! *Apparates to where she is* Jacob!
(Lily, you just wrote that you were hit with a spell)
(Lily, I still have unfinishe business with Jacob... I'll wait until you call for help, though.) Lauryn: *Appears* Rose? *Spell flies towards her*...
Lauryn: *DA coin burns* Rose! *apparates without thinking more than that*
Lauryn: *Apparates with Kris to the boys dorm. She lays him down in his bed, camoflauges herself, and watches him as he sleeps*
(Lol Rose, you should've accepted my invitations to learn to shapeshift...)
Lauryn: *gasp* SAL! *Frees Rose immediately* Don't let him get away.
(If your gold one is dead, the big one ate him)
(What? It's true, logically it should still be burning there, it's not been that long since then)