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(Bumpity)
Kris: Friendly? When has a Slytherin ever been friendly?
Kris: *Stays his hand* What?
Kris: Huh, hey! What's a Slytherin doing here?! *Grabs his wand*
(I wasn't speaking out of character)
Krys: It can't replace the effort put into making something by hand...
Kris: Woah, the Hell?! *Blinks* What's going on?
Kris: *Vision ends and he breathes heavily as he sees the Great Hall again* Haaa... Haaa...
Kris: Zack?! Does that mean I'm dead or something? Zack: Don't be stupid; Were you fighting before you came here? Kris: Well, no, but- Zack:...
Vision: *Kris is standing in a pure white space, he can't see anything around him* ???: Hey, Kris, stop acting like she's leaving you! It's...
Kris: I know, she told me she'd have to go for today... Even one day makes me miss her terribly... *Suddenly his eyes turn pure white and he has a...
Krys: Now that it's fixed... I can try that... *Smiles* Next time you see this guitar, it's going to look even better. And I'm not even going to...
Krys: That's... I never thought of that... Thank you! *Hugs Lily*
Kris: *Smiles weakly and sighs, glancing over at Hufflepuff table*
Krys: You told me already *Giggles* But I still think that the piano sounds better than guitar... I never had the chance to play one though, I...
Kris: *Thinks of Angie and apparates to the Great Hall, landing at Griffindor table instead of Ravenclaw* Huh? Whoops. Hey Rose, good morning.
Krys: *Blushes* I learned it a few months ago... But you played that beautiful piano song! You were at least as good, and I think better than I was...
YAY
(Back)
O.o Incredibly well-written...