Separate names with a comma.
Kris: Angie... Meet my mother...
*Frontyard has a large, perfectly shaped stone, and a life-sized statue of a woman next to it. The stone reads: "Amber Taylor Thorn, 1985-2011,...
Kris: *Looks a bit sad* You'll see... Come with me... *Leads her into the front yard*
(Lol)
K: Yes... I do... *Chuckles to himself* I had no idea what my feelings were telling me when I first saw you, but as I began to examine my own...
Kris: Great. But before anything else... *He steels himself, taking a deep breath* There's someone I want you to meet...
Kris: Yes. This place has been a part of my nightmares, and I needed to remove this burden... With you next to me, I am free of my own mental...
Kris: The house isn't any good if it's lying like this forever... I mean, I might as well take care of it, and since it has everything needed for...
Kris: Since we're getting married after all... I thought maybe... We could live here? Of course, after I've cleaned it up.
K: *Blushes even more* I'm fine, I just have never had a girl... Woman... That I loved... Oh, now I've gone and said it! *Blushes furiously and...
Kris: I wanted to come here to finally stop running... From my memories... And, I was thinking... *Turns towards Angie, tears running down his...
K: You're welcome... *Hugs her back, although a little unsure why she's thanking him, he has an idea..*
K: Yes? *Looks her in the eyes*
Kris: This... This was my house... *Shudders as he struggles to keep himself together* My... My mom... She was killed here... *Points to the bed*...
NO TAKING BREAKS! Although I agree, you have been on quite the killing rampage, who cares? You've put a LOT of work into the writing, and it...
K: W-well... I guess.
Kris: *Sprints upstairs suddenly, practically breaking down the door, finding a master bedroom, with a king-sized bed, open dressers, an empty...
Kris: *Walks upstairs, seeing the kitchen, all the plates smashed, silverware scattered everywhere, everything in a mess* I remember... *Clenches...
(Hurry, lol)
(Just so everyone knows; This is Kris's house... The toddler toys were his and Zack's, the reason everything's a mess and knocked over is because...