Separate names with a comma.
Amber: *Suddenly shoots out of the water with pure white wings* AUNT ROSE! Look at me! *Flies around a bit clumsily, but flies nonetheless*
Amber: Oh yeah? *Dives under as well, following*
No problem
Yes, I am. Also, my name is spelled with one "s". Not two. I am Kristofer, or Kris for short
Wow... HURRY AND UPDATE KATIE!
Krys: *Follows Opal* Hey...
Guess what? THIS EXISTS ALREADY!
Kris: Oh, I see. In that case, I'll see you tomorrow... Unless of course, you wish me to stay..? *Watches for her reaction*
Amber: *Laughs at Rose* Oh, come on! *Splashes Rose*
6 more bumps and I update!
I've read far too much for my own good... Began reading at 4, was reading Harry Potter by 5, and I recently read the entire book of Inheritance in...
You know it
Amber: Oh, no you don't! We go together! *Quickly grabs Rose's hand and apparates just above the lake, and the pair of them fall in* WOW that's cold!
Nice, but please put in proper punctuation, as well as paragraphs (Extremely important!) where they should be. And I agree with Chibi, your...
Amber: Ok! *Takes off her normal clothing, and transfigures her underwear into a swimsuit* Haha, Aunt Rose, will you be joining me? *Smiles sweetly*
Kris: Well, she hasn't entered my barrier yet... If she was in trouble, we would know... *Smiles and hugs her comfortingly*
(I updated!)
I have to admit, I suck at keeping deadlines... BUT, I did write 8 more chapters on paper... So here it is, the next part! Notice: I have 5...
Amber: Sure! *Takes Rose's hand*
Kris: *Opens his eyes, tail flicking* Yes? *Smiles*