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Bump
Sammi: -walks around-
I don't have an idea on what to put in the story… but I'll pm you when I do!
You already have some detail, but I think you should put more, like describe in depth what she's feeling. Good start!
Sammi: -sighs- I don't know
Sammi: Well then, Alex, why are you here?
Sammi: Fine. My name's Sammi. What's yours?
*it did
You did!!! BUMP!!
Yay!!
Sammi: -turns around and sees him- Who are you?
Sammi: -watches the fish-
Sammi: -dips her feet in the water-
Sammi: -sits by the river-
() Sammi: -walks around-
(Lol I was like "that's a guy…?")
Sammi: That won't affect me. You can't hurt me -laughs-
Sammi: -jumps out in front of Jack- What do you think you're doing?
Sammi: -gets out of the tree and starts walking-
(I think I might know)