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Kat: I said tree. -laughs and rolls eyes- *mumbling* Desperate...
Kat: If you get a splinter... You can't sue me. -laughs- Go on... Get your smooch on with Woody.
Kat: I don't dwell on the past! That's why I get pissed when someone tries to make me talk about it! -sighs and starts walking in middle of road-?
Kat: -laughs and shakes head- No just kidding. You have to kiss that tree. Just a peck.
Kat: -sighs and rubs temples- *mumbles* Everything I do is a slip up...
Kat: -to Max- "And you were DRUNK! In MY apartment. Jesus I didn't want you tearing up the place. Just get your own place." -turns around again-...
AMEN!^
Kat: -to Max- "Thats my apartment. You don't just stay there because you want to. That's rude." -turns around quickly- Why? Does it make a...
Kat: -to Max- "I don't hate anyone.." -keeps walking-
No no I think this story just needs tweaking and little polishing and you'll be good to go. PM me.
I know I say this SOOOO MUCH!! But GRAMMAR! It makes you look good! So correct the grammar. Make the plot go smoother. And re-read before you...
Kat: -pulls away from hug- Okay thanks. -walks away-
Kat: -to Max- "I lived on the damn streets when I was only five. So stop complaining."
Look I'm picky as hell. I don't read every single story on here and try to fix them. I fix the ones that look interesting. I think your story can...
Kat: Fine. Want my life story? I was abandoned very young because my parents hated me. I was on the verge of dying because I was shot in the waist...
Kat: So? We've all done something bad in our lives. -takes a drink of beer- I sure as hell have. -winks at him-
Kat: What things? -side glances- Is it bad that I choose to keep it all inside? -rolls eyes- What are you a shrink?
Okay first off... I'm gonna be an A-CLASS BITCH! But honestly you need it. ONE: Fix the grammar. Improper grammar makes you look really bad....
Kat: -sighs- And that is why I keep it on the inside...
Kat: -laughs- I know she wants to.