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Lily: *Groans*
Lily: *eyes open slowly* Ow... Harry: *Runs past Corin to Lilys side* Hey Lil Sis, enjoy your sleep? Lily: Oh harhar your very funny...
Lily: *Unconcious still*
Harry: Hospital Wing by now.
(Hospital Wing then I knew that... lol okay maybe i never)
Harry: She was found in the Common Room in blood. That's all I know.. She's down the hall at the minute Fox is trying to heal her! The last thing...
Harry: IF SHE DIES- *Eyes tear thinking about it* YOU JUST BETTER HOPE SHE DOESN'T!!
Harry: WELL JUST SO YOU KNOW SHE COULD DIE NOT THAT YOU CARE AT ALL!!
Harry: LILY IS HURT AND I WANNA KNOW WHY?!
Harry: *Finds Corin* OI MINI MALFOY!!
(Okay)
Lily: *Thoughts circle around Corin*
Harry: *Passes her needle, thread and some water*
Lily: Corin....... *Unconcious again*
Lily: Krys...?
Lily: I.... Would..... Help..... But..... I'll.... Mess.... It.... Up
Lily: *whimpers*
Harry: L-Lily.... Lily: Krys.... your.... hurt....
(Who da best? we da best! XD)
Lily: *coughs* C-Corin.....