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(No idea where you are Katie... You could always be spying on Harry and hear that Lily has been taken to the chamber?)
(Lily has been taken to the chamber of secrets and Harry ad Fox are on a rescue mission!!)
Harry: *Falls on the floor* Ouch!
Harry: *Jumps down with her* WOAH!!!!
Harry: Okay.
Hope: Gweat! How mwy Mwental Cwase?
Harry: *Breathes unsteadily getting more worried and angry every second*
Hope: *See's James and Stops crying* MWENTAL CWASE!!! *Giggles*
Harry: Not gonna. *Turns the corner and runs Into Myrtles bathroom* MYRTLE WHERES LILY?!?! Myrtle: Last I saw her she was pulled down there by a...
Harry: *starts to run down to Myrtles bathroom pulling Fox behind him* Lily: *Lay on the floor of the chamber. Dying slowly as my life fades.*
Hope: *Cries of tiredness* Rose: Hope! Shushh! *Cradles Hope*
Harry: No. Not Lily. Anyone but my sister! tell me they didn't just say lilys name!
(Oi Kriss!! Look after my sistah! Yeah I noticed the names ;) )
(hm... Let's see... You could run into harry and fox on their way down and help them get Lily back?)
McGonagal: It's worse than we feared. A student has been taken to the chamber. Snape: Who? McGonagal: Lily Potter. Harry: *colour drains from...
(Who are you playing then I'll figure it out?)
Harry: Pft! I'm not going to the common room I'm finding out what's going on! *turns a corner and see's Snape presses Fox against the wall*
(Lol I'd just jump in.)
Harry: *Gets up* We need to find it! It's getting ready to- * McGonagalls voice sounds in corridors* McGonagall: ALL STUDENTS PROCEED TO YOUR...
Harry: Ye- *Hears the Snake* Did you hear that?!