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-hops up to his feet-
(name: Colin yzerman race: half human and half angel wings are black)
-grabs her throat and slams her to the ground and puts a knive to her throat- Try that again and I'll kill you I could have killed you already...
-relaxes and sheathes his katanas-
-prepares to stab her-
-prepares to defend wings spread out to the maximum extent of 20ft each
-sees her in that form puts away the knive and draws his katanas-
-walks over to the rat and removes his throwing knive-
-modifys the mines so they can be fired from a sniper creating a moving bomb if attached to someone-
Don't forget to use foreshadowing to build suspense everyone loves suspense.
What about some more foreshadowing it could make it better
Non existent I had a rep of people liking me that's what I was talking about it existed now enough if you are going to try to keep me fighting...
-pulls out a throwing knive and throws it killing a rat-
Cloud: cosmos what do you need me to do (also can I do the character of chaos because I want to do that because I've beaten both dissidia stories)
-teleports into his house-
Yes I agree but I think it could use some more foreshadowing
Good I have a recon mission for you we need info on the condition of epsilon eradinus the planet you'll go in on a prowler to get in under the radar
Stupidity I've seen true stupid reasons for suicide like just because you hate yourself or you hate everyone those are stupid reasons don't get me...
(sip$
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