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Raith: *Scowls* The hell is up with you always bumping into me? You following me or something?
(Why do I have to? I thought he said just you xD)
Bump, then bump, then bump, and repeat.
Raith: *Leaves class*
(Not seeing it)
(Okay? Hawk knows best about what?)
(But we do need more bad characters O.o)
Raiden: Get to it, search the outer perimeter of the castle walls, I'll check for any hiding spots or hidden hallways inside.
(Just like if some variable changes, Lucy's visions of the future will change with them)
Raiden: *Looks over at the two girls* So before we get attacked, we need to have a look around the castle, to see where possible escape routes are.
(Lol)
(Anyone feel like making a bad guy character?)
Raven: *Looks at various photographs* Hmm... This is it? They don't look like much...
(Well, shall we continue this?)
Raith: *Naps in class*
Lauryn: Sorry about that, Sam! *Heads to class*
(Raven Bounty hunter, of a sort. Looks: "Gilbert Nightray" from Pandora Hearts. He's known to take any job, provided he's well paid, and he does...
Riku: *Wanders near the edge of the forest*
(We need enemies! Aries is paranoid of an attack, right? Then let's make some more enemy characters and create some danger! XD I'll make someone...
(There needs to be more conflict here, or else this will get boring fast xD)