Separate names with a comma.
(I am continuing a little bit won't be more than two pages tho cause I'm going to bed soon) -I nod- Goodnight Savage.
Whole" he" stupid typos
She means instead of posting a while bunch of comment and questions about the story post them here instead of on the story thread Mordici
(so u mind if we continue?)
(who's impatient now )
-I glare at Julie- Please put that paper away. (btw we shud wait for savage)
(I ran out of chill pills :/) -I smile- Happy I came along now Julie?
(back. And wdf is she lol I swear she pmed me then disappeared)
(shower brb 10 min)
(she pmed me but idk where she is now!!!)
( shes back! Zomg!!!)
Sorry to be a critic but living forever doesn't mean u can't be killed. Immortality and invincibility are 2 different things.
(wonder where she is she's always on)
(lmao)
(I know )
Yes 2 days until impending doom.
Short and simple ~Sal
(waiting Julie lol)
Excellent more please!
You sir are neglecting your duties to write more