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Ahh ok gotcha
-Ice covers me from where the rain had froze. My face is slightly blue. I lay in the doorway unmoving but breathing-
(lmao Julie u shud kidnap me)
-My breathing is shallow. I lay on the floor still unconscious-
(alright I'm going to bed as well. And ur passed out too now lol so ur in a fairly good position to be skipped)
I know I read all on ur first thread! It was really good
-I see a silhouette coming towards me before everything turns black and then I slip unconscious-
-Everything slowly starts turning black-
-I hold my gloved hand out in front of me and can hardly see it. I fail to see the edge of the roof and step off hitting the snow covered ground...
-The snow gets too deep to continue running. I start treading through it. I wrap my arms around myself trying to keep warm. I've lost sense of...
-I continue jumping roof to roof. I see my breath everytime I breath out. I start shivering. The wind picks up and it begins getting hard to see....
-The rain slowly starts turning to heavy snow as the temperature drops- "Im going out for a while. I'll be back." -I start sprinting across the...
I just read part one and loved it. U got urself a new fan
-I look at the note only to find the rain has washed the ink off. I stand up- "Nothing now...."
-Tears roll down my cheek but are made invisible by the rain.-
(lol)
-I stand up yelling again- "Julie!! Where are you!!!"
(oh ya be happy about my pain. Meanie lol)
I sorta do but it kinda confused me when u suddenly switched from where u saw me and the old man to the school
-I fall to my knees- "Why...?"