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-I return the kiss passionately-
-As I speak my lips brush hers. I whisper- "You're everything to me."
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-I gently kiss along your neck and up to your cheek. I rest my forehead on yours and gaze into your eyes-
-I gently kiss your neck-
-I match your passion wrapping my arms around you-
-I gently caress your back with my fingertips-
-I gently run my fingers along your cheek. I deepen the kiss a little-
"I know." -I gently return the kiss-
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"I love you with all my heart and soul Rose. Nothing will change that."
-I smile- "Whatever we have itll be our child. That's all that matters."
-I nod- "I'm sure." -I chuckle as I think of something- "If we have a boy however are you sure you can handle another me running around?"
-I nod looking into her eyes.- "Alright."
-I look at her- "If that's what you want. Remember your wish is my command."
-I look up- "There's always Wilson and the orphanage." -I look at her- "Unless you want our own child..."
"Oh..." -I look up at the sky thinking. I turn back to her- "A family would be nice."
-I smile and look at her- "How about now..."
-I lay down beside her moving close to her-