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-I gently touch her cheek and my hand glows. Warmth flows through her body and her back heals-
"Rose?!" -I run over kneeling beside her- "Are you alright?"
-I jump in surprise and look at Shade- "You're the one from the beach..."
Great job!
-the wind drowns out the scream making it impossible to hear-
-I stand up gritting my teeth- "We should keep moving." -I draw my bow-
-I can't see through the thick blizzard. I turn back to Rose and smile- "My magic didn't work because someone else was healing you. Seems we have...
-I see her wrist healing and look around to see where it's coming from-
-I kneel down gently touching her wrist. My hand glows an then stops suddenly- "Something's blocking my magic..."
"Hopefully that was the worst part."
-I lay on the ground breathing hard. I slowly struggle to my feet gritting my teeth in pain. I look concernedly at Rose- "Are you okay?"
-I feel her wobbling and reach an a back to support her. I grasp the edge of the cliff and pull us up with a great deal of pain-
"Don't let go of me!" -I grit my teeth slowly climbing. Ice begins collecting on my cloak and the blood from my hands freezes-
Bump!
-I relax feeling the warmth and the climbing becomes easier. I smile- "Thank you." -The hook comes loose from its place and we begin falling. I...
-I slowly start climbing up the rope. The cold makes it difficult and my muscles ache-