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Rapier it's a sword.
-I finish preparing and go to the jet I have waiting for me. I slowly step up the ramp inside. I sit down on one of the chairs and read over a...
Sweet! Salrion Grayson Elf Looks: [img] Age: 16 Personality: Clever, kind and caring to others. Enjoys life. Makes the best out of the...
(you all are going to fast. I'm still preparing lol)
Do elves count?
(then why did u say people hushed?)
-I see a rustle in the leaves and quickly realize it was a trap to draw my attention away from the real threat. An arrow slams into my shoulder-
(u know u and Mordici are the only ones there right Shirley?)
(what was that Silver?)
(watch the language.)
-I take my sling pack off and lay it on the table. I start putting gadgets into compartments made specifically for them. I add a parachute...
(lol np) -I shrug grinning- "Hes my old partner. I taught him everything he knows. I know his moves, his tactics, pretty much every move he makes."
(also try and be a bit more detailed)
(I haven't gone anywhere yet...)
-The commander steps into the room his eyes glancing around. He nods when he sees me and walks up to me- "Agent Grayson! I assume you got your...
-My PDA beeps and I quickly take it from its strap on my chest. I read over the message.- "Hmm...Seems I have a mission in London..."
-I finish the wiring and smile as its fully repaired. I place it back on the gadget wall.-
(np)
(little note Silver. Don't put quotes on ur actions. It'll get confused with speech)
-I lean down my face inches from it. I carefully do the wiring-