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(what do you mean if they actually do hurt me?! They nearly killed me you can't get more hurt than that)
(I think that kitty needs to be spayed )
-I don't protest and slowly close my eyes again-
-I smile and hold her close dancing with her-
-I smile weakly-
-I nod and look into her eyes. I take her hand. My voice is a little better- "Don't leave..."
-I awake from the sudden movement. I look around and realize where I am-
(oh ya that's a good idea. Bring more in when im pretty much helpless and I'm the one they want )
(Ahh that's right.)
(what's DA stand for again?) -I drift off to sleep-
-I clench her hand and slowly close my eyes-
(cya)
(there's your answer )
-I smile-
Bump!
-I speak faintly unable to speak any louder- "I love...you too..."
-I smile and stare into her eyes- "Your welcome..."
(Lmao I was jk. Scratch that and keep the original. I'll repost it) -I swallow the liquid and feel warmth flood through my body. Life starts...
-I smile- "Your like your mother in a lot of ways."
-I cough again at that moment and most of it gets spit out- ()