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-A hush goes over the crowd followed by gasps and stares of amazement and wonder as the flash recedes. I slowly look up and widen my eyes in...
-McGonagal speaks again- McGonagal: "I don't believe it!!! With that daring leap Salrion has just won the Quidditch cup for Gryffindor!!...
(it was either that or get hit in the ribs by a bludger )
-I gently drop to the ground and hold the snitch up. The crowd roars-
(WINNING!!! )
-I watch as the ground gets closer and closer.- "Gotta think...Accio broom!!!" -I grab the broom as it appears my feet inches from the ground as...
-I dive off my broom grabbing the snitch and dodging a bludger in the process. It hits Lucien in the ribs and he gets knocked clear off his broom....
-I slowly rise to a standing position on my broom to get a greater reach over Lucien-
-We ram eachother both after the snitch. When the snitch comes within a few feet I extend my hand to it-
-Lucien pulls up beside me having seen it too. He elbows me in the ribs and I grit my teeth in pain.-
-I'm amazed at myself for dodging it- "How did I do that?!" -I see a glint of gold out of the corner of my eye and do a 180 speeding off towards it-
-Lucien manages to stay on his broom. I turn around just in time to see a bludger inches from my face. I somehow miraculously turn my body to the...
(I've got twenty on potter! Sorry lily but his dad is more famous than yours )
(It would be interesting to watch ) -I roll to the right avoiding a bludger and grin as it hits Lucien who was following behind me-
-The crowd roars in excitement. McGonagal speaks again- McGonagal: "Now without further ado let the games begin!!!" -The balls used in play are...
-I fly out onto the field with my team. Mcgonagal shouts over the noise- McGonagal: "Welcome everyone to the Quidditch Championship!!! Today two...
-I smile and fly into the meeting room with my team-
-I fly to the quidditch field in my uniform-
(Haha. Anyway I've got something big planned at the quidditch game so nobody ruin it )
(perhaps)