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Scarlet:-comes up behind Zane- hello
Snow:-smiles- that's sweet, I don't know it's like she's there all the time but not -sighs- oh well
I thought we were just Writting a story not a story RP
Vannessa growls and walks past them bumping Sophia with her hip sending her down, her friends laughing " don't cross me losers, I have more...
Good, a little typos here and there but I like it, still I would use more descriptions to help describe and develop your characters more
Snow:-stays behind Collin- so how. Long have you all been here?
Vanessa smirksand rests one hand in her hip, her skirt barely school dress code. "why hello sooo glad you came to school today, I was really...
Snow:-looks at her shocked- we can't hit anyone that wouldn't be nice, and they could get hurt
Scarlet:-grins wickedly- I wouldn't love it -laughs-
Snow:-shivers- ghosts freak me out
Scarlet:-sees Jacob fall and rushes over- what did you do Sam!
She shrugs it off and counties to talk to her friends dreading school, for many reasons
Scarlet:-looks at him- nothing just resting for the ambush
Snow:-looks at raven and jumps that she's watching her and backs away shyly-
I'd try and be more descriptive but I would like to see where this is going
Snow:-peeks down the hole-
Snow:-smiles- I'm glad were home Scarlet:-training for the ambush, sighs and sits down-
Snow:-sighs- I want to sleep, these two are making me tired
Snow:-smiles and kisses back-
(Wait I'm finding it i didn't see it)