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Story line: Not even centuries ago in another world, one filled with magic, mystery, hope, and chaos there were two sisters and two brothers. They...
Updating The first step inside any school can make or break your new reputation. If you walk in and your steps are small and timid then you are...
Yes this is counting too
Okay I'm back and this is counting hehe
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Scarlet: I will fight, I have too it's just astroth was like a father to me but now I know that he has done evil things Snow:-shrugs- I will help...
Scarlet:-sighs and flys up to the borders watching across at the angels- silly happy creatures Snow:-puts the harp down and looks around-
Snow:-walks behind scarlet- so what side are you on? Scarlet: good question
Yay
Snow:-smirks- tell me please
Snow:-looks at you carefully- with what?
I like it but yeah stronger rhyming would help improve
Thanks I tried to make little changes but keep them similar
I haven't and this sounds very interesting I love the word description and I want to read more
Snow:-sits and plays my harp on the cloud- Scarlet:-trains to kill the angels and spits on the dead demons head-
Never learned how to use a weapon
Name:snow Age:16 Power:has wings that retract and can fly and blend into her surrounding so she can fly without being noticed Looks:[img] Sweet,...
Snow:-walks to the clone- so what is. Raven up to anyways? Why do you have to do everything?
Snow:-hops down by the master- yes I killed that man in his house when he was alone so know one would know -smiles-