Separate names with a comma.
Snow: but I've never seen you
Snow:-stops and looks at will- why are you following me?
Snow:-runs off- Scarlet:-helps will fight-
Snow:-backs up and hides behind a tree- Scarlet:-here's the fighting and runs towards it growling -
Snow:-backs up- wh-why did you do that?
Snow:-looks at will and jumps back a little not knowing who he was-
Snow:-looks for rod- what did you do with him?
Snow:-walks back- we should be heading back
I'd love to collab with you, I'm a new author and I think this would be a good chance for me to grow
Scarlet:-looks at him and smiles back- so how is being a vampire little one?
Snow:-smiles- that's good
I'd separate main ideas so it's not a big blob of Writting but the story idea is wonderful and I'm excited to read more
(Sure just bump it for me)
Snow:-looks at you- why would you never hurt me? That's the part I don't understand
Snow:-sighs- I will always trust you, it's just I don't know if I should
Just pm me your updates before you post them and ill go and revise common mistakes and stuff then you can post on here
Okay I'd love to be
Snow:-looks at him as they walk away- what do you want to talk about?
Snow:-takes it- Scarlet:-growls-