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(I feel like starwars here come back to the light! )
-I sigh and take a step towards Jacob- "Please listen to me Jacob. You can still turn back from this road!"
(Lmfao )
"Rose lower your wand!"
<Quit it everyone! Don't make him angry! There's good left in him! I know it!>
-I smile- "Not as beautiful as you." -I dismount and extend my hand to help her-
"Jacob you may not have known it but you were one of my best friends! If I didn't want you around I wouldn't have given you the elixir of life in...
"Cut the crap!" -I contain the burst of anger- "Jacob...Is this really a life you want? A life of exile and unacceptabce?"
-I hear the change in his voice- there's good still in him -I step out letting my cloak fall to the floor. My voice is loud and booming like...
<He's using Imperio!!!>
(He's right! )
-I glare tensing up-
-I fight back the urge to blast a spell at Slytherin but does as he says-
Blast it Rose!
-We come clear of the tree into a small clearing. In front of us is a beautiful waterfall sparkling in the moonlight-
-I stay silent and hidden knowing I'm safe as long as I don't use any magic-
<Kris. I think. Oh blast he sees you!>
-I spur the horse a little faster the sound getting louder and louder-
<Kris. I can't believe what I'm seeing...>
-I quickly move to the side of the room-