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Also knows ninjutsu
Rain (Real name Salrion Grayson. Uses Rain as a cover name for business. He never uses his real name anywhere. Only those he trusts most know his...
Sweet! Count me in
Can I be Rain and have him look like this? [img]
No new issue tonight everyone. Pimd won't let Bubble Bunny on.
Anything for you my love
Come along with me and take my hand. We'll go far away to another land. We'll leave all our troubles and worries behind. We'll travel the world...
Also a bit better planning would help you immensely. Know what's going to happen before you write and have a solid storyline that goes in a flow....
It's fairly good Justin. I've seen a big improvement from the haunted house. A little more detail about the environment and how the characters...
Run your fingers through my soul. Tell me I'm the one you want to hold. Look deep into my loving eyes. Until you finally realize.... I'm the one...
(I don't know who did what but all I know is I want it to stop. NOW. It's Christmas Eve for crying out loud. Let's just all get along)
Justin be nice
(I'm on as well)
(Might wanna reread that. Only she's hiding. I just ran them all over with a car )
-I come clear of the trees in front of the waterfall and watch as the vehicle crashes into one. I run over most of the nazis sending the rest running-
-I near the hidden spring engine roaring-
-I duck my head as gunshots ring out. Bullets whiz over my head.- "Bloody persistent." -I turn a sharp right steering into the forest. I dodge...
(my thoughts exactly) -I see a German vehicle pull up behind me- "Oh great..." -I floor it speeding off down the road. The Nazi truck following...
-I drive off down the street wondering where Alida is.-