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-sits on bed hugging self- "She's was alright, she was alright. I made sure she was!" -cries silently-
-looks up- "No, but he's still out there. Someone I knew was killed there." -show picture to Grey and Lexi. Point to girl who looks like me- "It's...
Chapter 2 I got off the buss and walked inside. My dad was watching tv and my mom was making dinner. "Hi Emma, how was your day?" My mom asks....
-stops and catches breath- "There was a shoot out at Walmart. Five were killed. They guy is still out there we need to catch him." -pitches...
-looks at news. Shoot out at Walmart- "Oh my God!" Runs out of room to find Lexi and Grey-
-comes back and puts more blood into Eric. Walks out and locks door behind me. Walks to room and looks for target. Forgets about Walmart.-
-looks at views on vid.2 mil-
-finishes stitches- "you lost a lot of blood Eric. I'm going to have to give you some."- walks out of room toward blood room-
How's that for a twist???
Here's a twist. (Since you brought up the Rapunzel thing.) the mom is an evil witch and made herself look older. The mom cast a spell on the dad...
-applys pressure to side. Starts stitching up. Blood is still flowing.-
Man, I wish you told me that before. But you still read it!
-makes new video of singing- I'm ready for you Are you ready for me I'm invincible and I can do anything I'm ready to go Are you ready to see...
-walks in and sets him down on a table. Hands covered in blood and looking for wound-"There! In the side. Lex, can you get me some bandages and...
You didn't tell me how it ends, but by the way you're wording it, it'll end horribly.
-looks confused- "what footage?"-shakes head- "never mind lets get him back to the base." -runs toward base-
-sees Lexi with Eric on the ground. Runs over.- "Not again. What happened?"
I mean not as bad.
Actually Tash, you might be surprised by the ending. Since I'm writing to you, and some of the events are real, you might already know the...
Read mine! The End