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Tarragon: "I'll try my best." Runs into the town. Leg is on fire.
Tarragon: stands up "Thanks." Clutches leg. Still bleeding.
Tarragon: uses force to push me back. Struggles against it but to weak. Falls back wards.
Tarragon: raises lightsaber and charges. Sith charges with yellow lightsaber. They clash together and we fight.
Tarragon: limps away. "Everyone get out of here! The Sith are-" fighter lands and a Sith walks out. Activates lightsaber.
Tarragon: "Who?"
Tarragon: looks out window and sees something. Squints and sees it clearly. Sith starfighters.
Tarragon: "We're almost there." Points to window.
*at*
Tarragon: drops and clutches leg. Looks down and the bandage is soaked. Rips off another pice of cloak and ties it tighter. Sighs and leans head...
You already wrote this twice.
Tarragon: sees that Eric is asleep. Walks to window and sees Courasaunt in the distance.
Tarragon: opens eyes.
Develop the idea a little more. Use punctuation. All in all though, it's pretty good.
Really cool!!
Tarragon: falls asleep. (Night guys)
(Only Jedi. Well, from what I remember)
Tarragon: "Sorry, but I barely know you. But," kisses Eric. "That doesn't mean you can't ask again." Closes eyes.