Separate names with a comma.
Tarragon: "What?" Looks confused.
Tarragon: looks up. "Oh uh... I'm not sure exactly."
Tarragon: walks out of shop with a new dagger. Has a new target.
Tarragon: slices dagger through the tree. Makes intricate signs.
Sam: walks around the Autumn.
Tarragon: runs a finger along the blade.
Tarragon: walks int the forest and sits down at a tree. Takes out daggers and turns them over.
Tarragon: puts feet in water.
Sam: gets in.
Tarragon: walks into a shop.
Tarragon: returns to the lake. "I just love it!" Says quietly to self.
Sam: watches the sky waiting for evac.
As a song writer to another, it was alright. I'm not saying it was horrible because it definitely wasn't. A good tip is to organize it by: •First...
Personally, I think people make them so others who can't write (at all) have something to be proud of. That's just my take on it.
Sam: "Good. Make it as quick as you can." Sighs.
Sounds pretty cool. I have military in my blood and I would love to read your story.
Tarragon: gets up and walks to archery range.
Tarragon: sighs and jumps down. "Can't just sit here." Starts to walk the streets.
Sam: sighs a stands up. Talks over com. "This is spartan 312 requesting evac."
Tarragon: cleans daggers.