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Zane: dumb asses Kane and Jace: -they waited at the front, waiting for Snow to arrive-
Zane: hey I called to see if anyone was ere-he walks in the Foxes Room-
Wade: something wrong?
Wade: when did you get here?
Zane: -stops the motorcycle outside and walks inside-anyone in here-he yells- Blake: sorry but I rather do my own stuff like you a slut-he looks...
Blake: -stabs him in the knees with the knife-
Wade: -he opened his eyes-whose there?
Zane: -takes out a notepad and writes something on it before ripping it out and handing it to her-it's my phone number, call me whenever you want...
Blake: -grabs a knife on the table and walks toward the guard-can I join on the torture?
(Should I call it Hooking up with instead )
Zane: don't worry I won't tell a soul-he says-heck I don't even have friends at all-he laugh- Ian: having fun on a kill will lead to my demise
(I actually did at first Carly was flirting with Sparrow once she started flirting with Raven I realized it)
Ian: already did tons Zane: -nods shaking her hand-well nice to meet you
(Jen Zane responded to Snow) Ian: this money goes to the only person who killed Syrus and that's it-he sits down holding the briefcase in his lap-
Ian: -comes back holding a briefcase-I'm back
Zane: Matthew Thompson
Zane: my apologies for your loss
Zane: so what's wrong?-he tilts his head again-why were you crying?
Blake: you always make the mistake
Zane: ah yes you're the girl with those 2 scary guys-he acts surprised as he got closer to her-I was gonna go talk to you but those guy wouldn't...