Separate names with a comma.
Zane: why don't we go to the shooting range?
Wade: -wraps arm around her waist-what a feisty lady Zane: -grabs another raw meat and starts eating it along with the corn-
Colt: no he just sleeps close to the tree
Zane: -grabs it and throws it at her-catch Wade: so mean-he says with a sad tone-
No spelling mistakes? I already read it 3 times and still spelling mistakes and grammar
You're saying I didn't read any of your stories? I have read all of them and there are many grammar mistake on it
Colt: go wait at the tree-he tells his dragon before Sephiroth flies off-we usually sleep on a tree at times
?I feel like I'm talking to a 8 year oldwe gave you chances to write another story but you didn't follow it we aren't gonna make exception for...
Zane: I have form, bread, soda and raw meat?
Colt: -the dragon flies to the bar, slowly coming down once they reached it-
Zane: do you want something to eat?-he opens a can containing corn-
There were many grammar,spelling and punctuation mistakeshow can we take you seriously when you didn't read the rules
Zane: umm I'm 50,000 years old and 50 years old in Roc form while looking like a 15 year old so don't say you are older
You have been eliminated Kathy, as you kept on posting stories without permission
Zane: the cold will indeed affect you because there's not a lot of air if you go outside only I can go outside in my real form
Colt: Sephiroth has been with me since I was a toddler-Sephiroth flies up into the sky-
Zane: don't go outside or the cold will get to you Wade: such as?
Zane: of course we are, I been living here since I was a kid-he lads down, letting Angel down before turning into his human form-
Colt: -he whistles as his dragon Sephiroth comes landing beside him-get on-he gets on his dragon-
Zane: nay-he lets out a shriek as he soars into a mountain-welcome to casa de Roc