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Ian: -He sat on a crate in his casual clothes, watching civilians pass, giving out money to the poor people who asked him)
Colt: let's stay here longer Virgil: nope Parker: -he nodded as he sat down-
(When did I make Blake a god? He is the Co-leader and he is really lazy at times and doesn't follow rules which leads to his group failure, known...
(Blake perfect? Heck no, none of my characters are perfect as they each have a weakness)
Zane: -he laugh-I'm the only of my kind so you can guess what goal some of us we would instead of letting our kind go extinct)
(The hackers are the White Foxes and stop making your character perfect cause he isn't, Jack is the smartest in the group while Ark and Blake are...
Zane: nothing really
(Not really, Blake attended an Harvard at a young age but then he transferred to a school in New Zealand)
Virgil: I would but I'm not nice Colt: there are many things as to why I became the leader of the Rebels but I won't say Parker: cause if I...
(Smarter than Blake?you must be dreaming Josh)
Zane: I never pay attention to my birthday
Zane: December 10
Parker: but even if I learn who I must have been but I prefer myself right now
Zane: may 13
Parker: I must have been, I guess I must have been real important even though Im only 20 years old
Day*
Zane: what say were you born?
Parker: I wonder what I would have been if I haven't lost my memory
(Wtf it was suppose to be Bed not couch)
Blake: -he walks inside and falls asleep quickly on the couch-