Separate names with a comma.
bump!!!!!
My Final update for this short story I saw Zach and Tate grip up Karl. Therese had tackled Ashleen as started beating her up...
BUMP
^_^ ima update soon
Ok
Use paragraphs and Separate the dialogue a little bit more ^_^ other then that great story
^.^ its cool and later
No cursing on my thread yu'll get it locked
<_< AYE NO BYPASSING!
Ill see what i can do
Babe ill handle yu in pm
dont hate him!
update!
Here's my update I know its kinda short I woke up to Therese and Veronica jumping on me. They kept chanting. "Em get up we're gonna...
:3 i wanna be in the story if its ok with yu?
i want in it!
aye!!!!!!
It is when yur watching 2 kids that dont stay still