Arent you supposed to love me, to take care of me, to hold me when i cry, to laugh when i make a joke, give me advice about that cute boy, the one who ignores me you remember him, dont you? your supposed to let me make mistakes, hold my hand while i make that awkward transition from girl to wamon, But you didnt! Oh! the irony of it all, you left me to fend for myself! i cried under my sheets! i laughed at my own jokes, That cute boy? he called me a freak! He said i was ugly! do you think im ugly, mommy? I was never given the chance to make mistakes, I was given a book for that transition! you may be my mother but you are not my MOM. I'm fairly noobish to all this but I don't normally post. Please remember this is from the heart
Bytch it's amazing!!!!!!! FUC YES!! I It!!! You are so good at writing poetry!!! Girlie I luv ur poetry ^.^ Woot woot!! It's awesome!! :]
Haha you rock Jess! I want to hear flaws so I can improve it! Come on people let's go!! Haha I LOVE YOU JESS
Wow thats really nice!! i love it! I love poetry. Great job! Keep writing! Hope you feel better.
I cannot find any Flaws at all!!!! None!! Maybe put a few commas here and there, idk, bit it's amazing ^.^
Thanks Aphrodite it was actually written a few months ago so I'm all better haha I just wanted to make sure I was ready to post without breaking out in tearsand yeah i know lol i didn't proofread but yeah i need commas
Rules are made to be broken lol thanks it took alot to finally post itany suggestions for improving?