<3 --------- Something something, lost in thought. Do I really love you? Or is it another one of your mind games. Seducing me with your husky voice, I turn around and blush. My two faced personality fades away, As I fight the urge to kiss you. You hold me tight, Whisper lies into my head, As I block all emotions, That will betray me, just like you. Can't you just leave me? I'm melting. It burns... Just like the tip of your tongue as you twirl my hair, oh I can taste the chocolate. Cliché I say, I'm not a fool to fall for you. ... But I'm lying. Deep inside my heart screams in denial, Yet my body's attracted to you. Leave me alone, find someone else. ... Please... I beg of you. That smirk I see everytime I'm near you, Those eyes of yours that mesmerizes me, I'm in a fatigue, fighting away your sea of kisses, Drowning in your voice. "Leave me alone?" I ask, yet all I get from you is a hearty laugh. It seems that I'm in a tug o war, I hate/love you. Is that even possible? "My dear, everything is possible." I gasp as you enter my mind, my cries being covered by your hand that ripped my heart out. I taste the metallice blood, I fight the urge to attack you. I fight the urge to tackle you, ... To say I love you. -------- What? Can't a 11 year old express her hate and love on a keyboard? :|
No you're not good... YOU ARE AWESOME, FANTASTIC, SUPER, COOL, MAGNIFICENT, GLAMOROUS and MUCH MUCH more I wuv you
No, you can see the locked bubbub1998 threads for prooof. This is my last story before I go inactive. Hopefully my addiction will stop... I might lurk, who knows.
DO NOT GO INACTIVE THIS IS PROBABLY THE BEST WORK IVE SEEN ON HERE AND ESPECIALLY FOR AN 11 YEAR OLD!!!! WOWWW
Not really. First of all, you're eleven. I can honestly say that you probably don't know what that kind of love is. Maybe you have a crush or something, but it's not love hun. Secondly, YOU'RE ELEVEN. You should be posting pictures of yourself on PIMD forums thinking it's safe. I'm not saying you don't have the right to express yourself or do whatever you want. I'm just saying be mature and rethink yourself.
I'm not sayig you're a bad writer. This writing is amazing for an eleven year ild, but this isn't a place for kids you age if you get what I mean.
I know. I'm 15. But shes eleven. ELEVEN. Did you go on this and post pictures of yourself? Probably not.
Goddess, excuse me, I know I'm too young to know what love is, but trust me. Books are a good thing to read. .-. Crush? I don't. Never had one. Goddess, you're not my guardian, so don't panic over me posting pics. I know what I'm doing. I'm not STUPID. Third of all, young? Goddess, please go to off topic an count the number of teens. TEENS. 13-17? PRE TEENS. 9-12? YEAH. They rule the PIMD community. I don't see why you're eyeing my while there are many many others just like me. And Goddess, I appreciate you thinking about me, but even if I don't want to get pissed off, I'm slightly annoyed. Please don't mention this in the future, because I don't want to be extremely pissed. Mature? I'm mature enough to know what I'm doing. Maturity envolves responsibility, and I'm not sure if I can show that in a game. Rant finished.