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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Goldialocks, Oct 22, 2012.

  1. I'm making a story, it's a second attempt at one of my old favorites, which is funny because I hate almost all of the stories I've ever written. I need a partner to help me with plot making, and to fill in for me for some chapters because you all know I suck at updating, am a lazy asshole, and love to torture all of my readers with shit long hiatus-es.

    If you're interesting, just follow this stupid format as a sign-up thing:

    Nickname: you're smart enough to figure this out.

    Genres you're comfortable with: e.g. Romance, drama, etc.

    Sample of writing (can be from your old works or whatever):

    Write it like you actually give a crap about stories, type with 98% perfect grammar, nearly no spelling mistakes, use punctuation and capitalization and spacing correctly.

    Basically, type like you actually have some intelligence. :|

    Looking at some sad excuses of stories in FF nowadays, saying that is actually necessary.


    So... Yeah.

    Oh, and I was actually working on three updates for 'Breaking Point'. I didn't give up on it, just saying. I don't know what page it's at now so I can't really update it, and I'm not exactly in the updating mood to post it.

    K. I'm done. Duhrp.
     
  2. Please read kitty rant....
     
  3. Scratch that
     
  4. Hi Chloe,

    If you remember me, Sky, Toxic, (t's fine if you dont, no one does anyway) you said in the future we could do some story, so if I could work with you that would be great.

    I'll pull some older pieces in the first few pages of ff, or I'll post something here, if you want, just ask.

    Typically any genre I can handle, my least is romance, and best, anything else in the book. So you just tell me what you expect, and I'll give my ideas out to you like a regular collaboration.

    Its great to hear from you again since I have been extremely busy but I hope you will consider me, and I shall take all your valuations of my stories as inspiration, since I really liked the pieces you did. They had emotion, and a message to each word.

    Also, I wished we could do this with Amber, but she's gone for now, Andi Great author.

    If you read my babbling I appreciate it, and I wish to work with you soon if you accept me, but if you don't, I'll just try harder :3

    ~Sky
     
  5. Heya Chloe! ^.^


    Nickname: MommaPie/SensualPie/PieSexual
    Genres I'm Comfortable With: All genres I'm open to. Macabre stuff when I'm in a bad mood (most of the time )

    Sample Of Writing (Taken From "My Better Half):
    My car stood in the driveway, begging to be driven after months of not being used. I got it right on my sixteenth birthday, the glossy interior beckoning anyone who saw it to get inside and drive away. But not me. I politely hinted that I didn't want a car for my birthday, but my parents went ahead and got me one anyway.
    It was what any teen dreamt of, though, right?
    Shaking my head, I strode past my car, and started down the sidewalk to school. I kept my earbuds in, turning up the volume to a deafening level.
    As if the music could distract me from life, as it was happening right in front of me.
     
  6. Everyone else seemed to start it this way, so hi Chloe.

    Nickname: Rani/ Unicorn. xD
    Genre: Most types except romance. If it's romance then I usually make it dark. I'm probably best at writing horror kind of stories.

    Sample: (Sorry it's long/ish, got carried away.)

    "Can't wait, too burn it too the ground..."

    A smirk stole the shadows of Mia's proud face, illuminated by the lights of the party clear in her malicious vision.Tonight she would clean the world...They'd thank her for it later, she mused in her psychotic head as she nodded her head deliriously too the music.

    Her narrow, claw-like fingers brought themselves to her burnt black hair. With a quiet cackle, she stepped away from the house in front of her.But she dropped something...No one heard, no one knew, no one saw the blood shot girl who happened to drop the matches of hell.Who happened to bring to life the fiery figure of the devil himself...They were all to distracted to care about the unknown girl.It was too late to go back.

    The tall brightly lit house was over come by the roar of the flames. Moans turned to shouts;laughs turned to screams of terror.Mia smiled.She felt the adrenaline once again puncture her veins as she locked the rusty front door, with a key stolen minutes earlier without the blink of an eye.

    "You'll thank me for it someday." She said bitterly, before disappearing into the night air leaving nothing but the sorrowful pleas of desperation.
    (Not sure if I got the lyrics right at the start, but meant to be music coming from the party, to fit the scene, if it confused anyone.((Linkin park!)))
     
  7. Lemme just say a few things.

    You, Sky.

    ...

    OH MY FUCKING GOD I'M SORRY. ,_, I'm so, so sorry for forgetting. Dx What I'm writing though is a teen drama, and even though you're one of the best writers there is in Fan Fiction, I need an author who can grasp the feeling of childhood angst and pressure and confusion. ,_, However, since I've read a lot of the pieces you did, and because I'm guilty as hell, I'd like it if you worked with me on 'Breaking Point'. :3 If that's okay with you, of course.

    Pie. I loved it. ;u;

    The story I'm re-writing is Dick in a Box, except this time you can think of it as some sort of prequel to the actual story. The protagonist is supposed to be a pressured student, basically a prodigy, and what you wrote tells me that you can write shit like that. So... I pick you. :0

    And Rani, I loved your piece. It was super descriptive and it gave me many feels when I read it. ;u; Although you weren't picked, I'd like it very much if we could make a collab on another story of a different genre. :3


    Aaaaannnnndddd I sound like a sassy unicorn again.
     
  8. You sassy unicorn, you. >:D Karkat fan fiction troll time-
     
  9. Haha ok, thanks.
     
  10. ^.^ Thank you Chloe~
    I'll have to contact you on Pal, right? xD
     
  11. PM IS FINE :0
     
  12. :3 okay-
    I heard pal was super glitchy D:
     
  13. Haha, maybe a little.
     
  14. :3 Whatever is fine with you Chloe, I'm up to anything.
    Just pm me of whatever you want me to do with your story. 

    And no it's okay, don't apologize, you musnt. And I appreciate that you said I was one of the best, which I was shocked. 

    But thank thank thank thank you for the critism of why I wasn't cut out of it, I thank you a million, I will work on that. You rock, as always.

    But still, I'm always up for anything, so if you need any help, advice, someone to yell at, whatever, etc, I will be there.

    Thanks again.

    ~Sky
     
  15. And I'll work with you on Breaking Point 