Would everything be so perfect, If emotions were out of circuit? What if our feelings didn't exist? Would lovers still slit their wrist, If our partners happened to die? Would we tend to look to the sky, If we lost the apple of our eye? Would a parent still look so sad, If we lost one of our kids fast? Would anyone still get very mad, If our relationships didn't last? What if we always felt so numb? We would never feel so dumb. If we didn't feel anything at all, Would we call ourselves human? Many questions we don't realize. The current answers we surmise. Could we be able to sympathize, Seeing pain in someone's eyes? Our minds are vast like an ocean, Where emotions and feelings flow. Would it really be a big commotion, If we just let our emotions show? These emotions are so precious, These feelings are so infectious. Yet, we always take advantage, Even if we only cause damage. We always take others for granted, And morality only gets slanted. It's time to stop taking advantage, And try to patch up the damage.
Somebody is getting better... I actually liked some parts of this one. Only a couple lines made me cringe a little, but it was more of a personal word/phonetic sound choice than message choice. Crystal clear purpose. Good job.
Thanks. My editor didn't exactly point out what I did wrong tho. She's procrastinating about helping me stop procrastinating
LMAO, you saw dat? Funniest thing I've said today... at dat time at least. I don't write anything crappy.