Would We

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ChocolateThunder, Dec 23, 2017.

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  1. Would everything be so perfect,
    If emotions were out of circuit?
    What if our feelings didn't exist?
    Would lovers still slit their wrist,
    If our partners happened to die?
    Would we tend to look to the sky,
    If we lost the apple of our eye?
    Would a parent still look so sad,
    If we lost one of our kids fast?
    Would anyone still get very mad,
    If our relationships didn't last?
    What if we always felt so numb?
    We would never feel so dumb.
    If we didn't feel anything at all,
    Would we call ourselves human?
    Many questions we don't realize.
    The current answers we surmise.
    Could we be able to sympathize,
    Seeing pain in someone's eyes?
    Our minds are vast like an ocean,
    Where emotions and feelings flow.
    Would it really be a big commotion,
    If we just let our emotions show?
    These emotions are so precious,
    These feelings are so infectious.
    Yet, we always take advantage,
    Even if we only cause damage.
    We always take others for granted,
    And morality only gets slanted.
    It's time to stop taking advantage,
    And try to patch up the damage.
     
  2. Somebody is getting better... I actually liked some parts of this one. Only a couple lines made me cringe a little, but it was more of a personal word/phonetic sound choice than message choice. Crystal clear purpose. Good job.
     
  3. Thanks. My editor didn't exactly point out what I did wrong tho. She's procrastinating about helping me stop procrastinating
     
  4. only 90s kids will remember when jaco and chill beefed about who was better than the other.
     
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  6. Oh, defensive
     
  7. @ My editor... sorry you didn't want to help me that much.
     
  8. Not posting on your threads anymore smh?
     
  9. Lmao, it's a joke. Geez
     
  10. I had no ideaaaa?
     
  11. I had no ideaaaa?
     
  12. Maybe op should stick to writing his crappy poems and stop talking about me us campus smh
     
  13. Depends to the person. But you have a great idea hope to see your post again
     
  14. I have no idea why females use that upside down emoji so often. Sarcasm?
     
  15. LMAO, you saw dat? Funniest thing I've said today... at dat time at least. I don't write anything crappy.
     
  16. Thank you. My editor took her lazy ass to sleep so it'll be a while
     
  17. O I didn't see that
    But I did get to know about that ..and yea it was crappy
     
  18. Nah ?
     
  19. Definitely the sarcasm emoji
     
  20. another idiot posting bs
     
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