witchcraft and wizardry

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), May 22, 2011.

  1. Richelle walked quietly with David to the feast room to the sorting. Them both having the more than same charecistics hoped to be in the same class.
     
  2. They announced her name first. She ran up there and closed her eyes. She was a ravenclaw. Next was David lee. Her best friend was in ravenclaw too
     
  3. She heard a name she never wanted to hear:brittney cunningham.the name she used to curse in muffle school was in slytheren. Thank god she said breathing and relived.
     
  4. She glanced around the room and stared at Harry. Boy was he cute. David lee was a quiet kid and loved richelle. But her being in love hurt his feelings.
     
  5. David,Richelle,and Harry had they're classes together. She sat next to Harry in defense of the dark arts and a the time dumbledores army was there. When she couldnt do it she sat down unseen and cried at some point Harry saw her and she was able to do it again. It was as if he was her spirit.
     
  6. The next sorting was up. Those three waited for the sorting: first was calum crasswell. Ravenclaw.
     
  7. ( can you read my story, Secret Sanctuary and tell me your thoughts? ) great job!!! Love it!!!
     
  8. Because new students are behind in lessons they need to be taught the past lessons. But at the age of 18 both David and richelle had been there for 7 years. Harry at the time had been in his sixth year. Richelle was calums tutor along David was Now tutoring danny in gryfindor.
     
  9. Griffindoor -_-
    And I love Harry Potter
     
  10. During tutoring richelle noticed calum isn't a chatterbox like Danny as heard from David. As she explained the concept of defense of the dark arts,she heard a noise. She jumped up and pulled out her wand and screamed:HELAN RAVENCLAW!!!!! A ghost appeared. What's happening? Said the ghost tiredly. Why are dementors hovering the school?richelle asked quietly.
     
  11. Well they're coming after Harry by Dolores umbrige.the ministry hired that bitch again?!?!? Yea she wants most of you guys dead,especially Harry. Now it would be a good time to start protecting David.what do you know about David?!?!? She asked.she snapped at the name of her best friend.
     
  12. please not another gang-bang story
     
  13. Maybe your being too protective of your friend.said HELAN. Calum spoke up:what are dementors? Richelle walked to him and held his hands and looked into his eyes and she started to cry:they...they are ghost from askaban that suck the pure happy memories out of you.
     
  14. Then in walked Danny and David. Danny tried calm David down. What the HELL happened to him????? richelle screamed. David!David! Honey look at me,ok. He looked up. Breathe in and out. In and out he repeated. Calum,take him to madam pompfrey.
     
  15. Well david and me were outside- said Danny. She grabbed him and walked out the door and pulled him aside. You NEVER go OUTSIDE after its FUCKING DARK!!!!!!
     
  16. Manhunt! I swear we were only having some fun!! 
     
  17. What exactly what were you two talking about outside? Well I was trying to explain how your in love with harry and not with him. Well that helps me with nothing whatsofuckingever!
     
  18. Well-holy shit!! She spun around zapping 3dementors going to pompfreys office saving David. No take me instead!!!! He's gone thru enough!!! Dumbledore came and they left. What can you do??she said sniffling. well we can hope that he remember his girlfriend. Excuse me? He doesn't have a gf! Yes he does. It's you. She turned pink in embaressmeant.
     
  19. Wow.

    You have just disgraced Harry Potter and all of Wizardkind.

    My eyes have practically sizzled out of their sockets from trying to decipher the grammar and spelling mistakes.

    And you named it witchcraft and wizardry. A story copying all the characters from Harry Potter, having no back story to it, just randomly starting. Where's character introductions? Development? Correct punctuation?!

    *dies*