Wishes Come True - A SHINee Fan Fiction

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Naviesa, Mar 29, 2013.

  1. Karis POV

    "But- J-Just give me two weeks! I promise you that I can bring in more customers!"

    I practically whined, my boss glared at me and yelled

    "I've already given you a month Kari! A damn month!"

    His cigarette breath wafted near my nose and I almost gagged, tears welling up in my eyes, threatening to spill out.

    "Now out! Now!"

    I nodded meekly and grabbed my box of things, making sure to slam the door on the way out.

    °°°°A week later°°°°

    It had been a week since I was fired and now I was at home, cleaning, when there was series of loud bangs and kicks from the door. I put down the broom and went over, looking through the peephole. There stood 3 buff angry looking men, tapping their feet and cigarettes hanging from their fat lips. My eyes widened and I opened the door weakly.

    "When do we get our money, woman?!"

    The largest guy to the right asked, stepping towards me fiercely as I backed up.


    °°°°A half hour later°°°°

    I stood in the rain, soaking wet, boxes and bags surrounding me. I sat down and sobbed loudly, since the street had been deserted once the heavy rain started to fall. I didn't care whether my butt got soaked or if my stuff got soaked. I could only think of how shitty my life was and why I ended up like this.

    No home.

    No money.

    No nothing.

    I thought wishes came true.
     
  2. Agh! Sorry for the double post!! BTW this is just the prologue!!
     
  3. Ahh! I love SHINee!!!!! Keep me updated please!
     
  4. Bump! Should I continue??
     
  5. If you don't continue this story I might be tempted to cut your face up. ^~^
     
  6. Bump 
     
  7. Bump!!! This is really good. Keep meh updated!!
     
  8. Chapter 2

    An update for my few fans :-* Enjoy!!
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    Kari's POV

    As I sat on the ground, my butt numb from the cold unfriendly rain, I thought of how shitty my life was. My parents broke off all contact with me, I got dumped, I was fired, and the loan sharks had come for me. Now, I was a walking disaster.

    People walking by would think 'Oh, poor girl, she looks horrible....I would give her some money or something....but...Oh Well.

    People are like that, they're superficial. They just are, sometimes I am too. I looked up to the sky, raindrops pounding down forcefully on my delicate pale skin. I shouted at the top of my lungs:

    "Why did this happen to ME!? Why ME!?"

    It's what always happens in dramas or some shit chic flick. The girl would get financially broken or something and then some prince comes and saves her. Blah blah blah, shit like that. But my life wasn't like that, this wasn't a movie and I wasn't the star.

    I lowered my head as tears slid down my already wet face, adding to the pool dripping off of my chin. I heard faint footsteps and I tensed.

    Is it the loan sharks again?

    I thought. But no, I didn't hear any yelling nor did I smell cigarettes or garlic. The smell I experienced was quite the opposite. It was Cologne, the perfect amount, not too much, not too little. It was a fresh alluring scent that stood out from the musty smell of dust and rain.

    I was looking down at a pair of blue and orange running shoes, I slowly lifted my face, my wavy wet hair sticking measly to the sides of my face, my sad eyes met a pair of friendly deep chocolaty brown eyes. They were pulling me in,

    What person could hold such beautiful eyes?

    I was mesmerized, when suddenly the Owner of the beautiful eyes scooped me up bridal style and whispered into my ear

    "It's okay, if you come with me, everything will be alright, I can help."

    His voice was like the feeling of biting into a rich chocolate, hearing the soft but sweet crunch. I shifted my head and looked into his eyes, studying his other features. A perfectly shaped ovalish roundish face, a strongly built jaw, tanned skin, straight nose. My Body immediately stiffened, I was thinking What if this guy is a kidnapper? Or a murderer? Omygod, what have I gotten myself into?

    Just as I was thinking that I had seen his face before somewhere, my eyes closed against my will and I fell asleep right away in the warmth of the strangers arms.

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    Cliffhanger!! Sorta?? I don't even know, thank's for taking the time to read it and I would love some bumps and criticism! Bumps for continuism!!! And yes I'm a total Shawol!! Also, for other Shawols try to guess with SHInee member this is!! He is my favourite, here's a hint: He has a brother, whom is also good looking, lmao
     
  9. Bump!!!!!! Sounding awesome as always!
     
  10. Thanks Jess
     
  11. Anytime!! I always like to share my opinion.
     
  12. ME WANT MORE!

    Mmmm chocolate -drools-
     
  13. Bump, jeezus Sammi okaii then, expect an update in the next half hour. Tell me if you want to be notified when its updated!
     
  14. hapter 3

    Hehehehey!!!  Enjoy this chapter, hehehehehheehe muahahahahhahahahha!!!! Oh, and the guy Who discovered Kari was Minho^^ I might do other people's POVS too, maybe. Enjoy!!

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    Kari's POV

    I woke up quietly, my eyes slowly opening and studying the atmosphere around myself. I smiled thinking that I was at home, waking up to rays of sunlight beaming through the window. It was then thorny eyes snapped fully open and I woke fully. My brain took only a few milliseconds to register that I was not at home.

    Last nights events came rushing back to me as I sat up straight. I gasped as I remembered that someone had taken me in.

    "Crap!" I yelled loudly and I covered my mouth.

    I had just been taken to some random persons home! I looks down at myself, I was wearing light purple fuzzy pyjamas and my eyes widened at the thought. That means the person dressed me........I shook the thought away thinking that probably wasn't it. I was in a comfy bed with a bright blue comforter, I looked up to see a wood ceiling, no Wait, that wasn't a ceiling! I must be in a bunk bed...

    I looked to my right and saw a double sized bed, not a bunk, with a yellow comforter. I looked further and saw another bunk bed, the top bed had a white comforter and the bottom one a colourful polkadotted one. I slowly lifted my legs out of the bed and stood up and walked carefully placing each step, towards the door.

    I grabbed the handle and slowly opened the door, I poked my head out and looked to the left, to the right, seeing nobody, I stepped out confidently. I walked to the right only to hear the sound of clinking spoons and utensils against glass bowls.

    I tensed but overcame my fear and slowly began walking towards the sound. I jumped when the sound of a sweet male laughter added to the noise. I peeked my head around the corner and my eyes widened, there at a dining table, sat SHINee, eating their breakfast and whatnot.

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    EHEEHEEHEEEEEEE remember to bump!!
    hope my lovelies like this, and fyi for you people Who don't have a clue on what SHINee is, they are a contemporary Kpop band in Korea that consists of five male members. Onew, Key, Minho, Taemin, and Jonghyun. I will most likely update once more today!!
     
  15. OMG *Chapter
     
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  17. Bump!!!! X33