Why Not?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *aleieie (01), May 19, 2012.

  1. This is a story o3o sorry about all the story's but is wanted to make one

    Kora's POV

    Kora sighed. Her bangs covered her icy eyes. Her hair was a brown with blue streaks. She set her alarm off and changed to go to school.
    "Why did I have to move....... from my friends and boyfriend" she muttered angrily. She put some skinny jeans on and a cute shirt that showed some skin. She went into her bathroom and took out a flattening iron and she started to flatten her hair. She applied some make - up on, mascara to be exact. She walked out to the bus stop and signed getting on her phone she wondered how her friends were. She finally saw some lights flashing and she got on the bus. She had to wait a day for her car to come from her old home.

    The bus finally got to the school and she got off. She went to the front office and the assistant principle saw her and said " You are the new student......... Kora right?" she asked. Kora nodded shyly, she ran her hand through her hair and she put it back over her eyes. If you looked closely you could see her eyes. The assistant principle handed her a schedule and told her to her or she would be late. Kora hurried along and she found room 301. She barely opened the door and she walked in. Scanning around she found a empty seat next to a boy who was drawing. His hair was somewhat like hers but she just paid attention to the front.
     
  2. So nice, reminds me of the days if middle school, lol XD I'm too young! Lol but anyway love the story, keep doing it, more detail is the best stuff: and check out my ff: Spiked tears! It will might help you lol
     
  3. Me luv! Bump!
    I like the idea, the characters, and the fact that u bothered 2 describe the characters.
     
  4. Thanks so much guys o3o

    Cooper's POV

    I was fiddling away with with my pencil, trying to accurately draw my mom who passed away last year. Everybody thought I was gothic or emo but I am not. I just really like my hair like that. My hair is jet black and to me very fluffy. I look up to see the teacher stating at me and he was about to open his mouth when the door silently creaked open. I watched a girl sit at the desk besides me and I hoped that Emily wasn't here today, she was my girlfriend and well she say there. She was an absolute drama queen. I wonder why I even say her. I remember why........... Actually no I don't. I think I must of been drunk or something. I looked at her for a little by and studied her. She had hair that covered her eyes.
    Just like mine I thought. I returned my attention to the front class but the door burst open and here cam Emy. I cursed under my breath because Emy was staring at the girl in her seat.
     
  5. Agh so many typos

    Sorry I am on my iPod typing this
     
  6. Kora's POV

    Kora muttered something as the door burst open and to her surprise the girl was angry. She went up to Kora and muttered something angrily before she spoke
    " Get out of my seat!!" she said angrily . Kora flinched, she was afraid of people yelling and people who got what try wanted. She was about to get up when the girl pushed Kora, which just made Kora get back into the seat. The guy right next to her had stood up and stopped Emy's hand from hitting Kora. Lot scrambled to the desk right next to him and sighed happily when the teacher came in.

    The bell rang finally time for lunch. She rushed to get herself a Greek salad. Kora went outside when the girl came and threw her tray up, but somehow he boy caught it all and handed it back to Kora before he followed Emy.

    Kora went and ate under a tree and he wondered who he boy was. She was in thought until she heard a snap. She had finished her lunch she went I investigate and she found a couple kissing. She looked away not wanting to barge in. When she came back she found the guy sitting there drawing someone, she looked closely it was her.

    "Me......... Why would he draw me" she muttered and she settled right next to him, where he startle almost hit her. " Hi ....... I am Kora and you are......" said Kora.
    " Ohhhh I am Cooper" he said while putting the notebook away.
    " Thanks for saving me from that girl" she said smiling and she moved her hair a bit reveling her eyes.
     
  7. Cooper's POV

    Finally I can draw in peace I thought I myself as I sat under a tree. I saw a girl move next to me and I was about to put my arm around her , thinking it was Emy but then I made it look like I was startled or something. I heard a voice and looked at the girl and smiled a bit. She introduced herself and I said who I was.
    Once she showed her eyes I couldn't help but stare. I could feel myself blush I bit and I looked away. The wind blowed my hair out of my eyes and revealed emerald green eyes. I had never shown my eyes to the public not even to Emy. I moved my hair back into place but Kora giggled as she moved my hair out of my eyes. She was like a little child but something about her made her stand out. I smiled some at Kora who blushed for just a moment
    " So............ I -" said Cooper who was cut off from the bell. I quickly put a array if numbers on her hand and
    smiled at her before I left for class

    Kora's POV

    Kora saw his eyes and wanted him to keep showing them so she moved the hie out of his eyes, she was blushing at the time. The bells rang and he quickly scribbled numbers on her hand with a pen. She looked at it and she squealed with joy for it was his number.

    Once school finished she went back on the bus and rode home. Once she for home she smiled to see her black and blue mustang. She got her phone and saved Coopers number. He texted him and said it was Kora. We talked for hours before I asked if he had a girlfriend. He said he does and I sighed out of the phone and said " Well lucky her" and then my dad called my name and I said bye before I went downstairs to see someone at the door. I opened it I find Cooper soaked wet from all the rain
     
  8. It takes a while too write you know >.>
     
  9. Cooper's POV

    I had heard something on the other line sounded like lucky her. I was about to say something when she said goodbye cause her dad was calling her. I went to go see Emy cause we were on a date. I went to her house in my black Volkswagen. He knocked on Emy's door and her mom opened the door and he went I her room to find a jock basically on top of her but she let him. I watched for a while and then knocked which made him fall off the bed.
    " Hi Emy........" said Cooper smiling.
    " Please forgive me...." she said tears were forming in her eyes.
    " Of course I WON'T forgive you..... We are through forever! " he said smirking at her. The jock looked at Emy disgusted cause he thought she was single. Cooper left smiling, he said goodbye to Emy's parents and he went to Kora's house. He had seen her get off the bus as he drived home. He knocked on the door soaked from the rain that was poring. Kora let him in before handing him a towel. He walked in and asked to go to the bathroom to change. Kora led him to the bathroom and went to her older brothers room go was in the army. She went and got a shirt and some pants. Copper took of his shirt, revealing abs, he forgot to lock the door.

    Kora's POV

    Kora opened the bathroom door and stuttered for a bit. She slipped on the water he tracked in an fell into his arms. She turned red before she gave him the clothes but he held onto her. Kora blushed even more and she smiled at him. She walked out of the room happy
     
  10. Cooper's POV

    Cooper held onto her and he wondered why he did. He smiled to himself as she walked out. He put the clothes on and walked out, he introduced himself to her parents as only a friend. He went to her room and knocked before entering. He smiled at her.
    " So......... " said Kora wondering how he knew where she lived.
    " Sorry if I seem like a stalker but I wanted to talk to somebody and since you are my only friend........" he said sitting in a chair.
    They talked about his break up and just school.

    It was getting late and when he was about to leave he asked







    " What did you mean 'lucky her'
     
  11. Kora's POV

    The whole time he was talking I was flattening my hair. I was going to some party at 11, she wondered if she should ask him if he wanted to go to the party. She felt eyes on her, Cooper's eyes. She listened and felt bad for him. She had picked out the perfect dress, it was black, short and strapless. She saw it was getting late and he said he had to leave. She nodded and led him to the door, once he asked that question she giggled.
    "Well you are just so kind that she was lucky, I mean you saved me from Emy" she said. She was hypnotized by his eyes again but she snapped out of it and asked if he would like to go to a party. He nodded and she smiled at him.
    " It starts at 11" she said giving him the address. She waves goodbye as he drives away. She goes back to her room and puts some heels on. She applied some makeup on and she looked at her clock 11:30. She hopped into her car and drove to the party
     
  12. Great!:) Amazing details
     
  13. It's really good there are a few spelling errors and little story details that seem a bit forced but otherwise it's awesome
     
  14. Thankies!!

    Cooper's POV

    He put some skinny jeans on and a shirt. He made his hair extra fluffy since the ladies live fluffy hair. He got into his Volkswagen and drove to the address, he entered and saw Kora had already had 5 beers and was kinda drunk.
    "Shots and she will make bad choices" he muttered under his breath. He kept his distance and he flirted with many girls but Henley then alone, many ladies touched his hair and asked him to dance but he didn't dance and only took one shot, he only got drunk drinking countinuesly. He had a lot of fun and went to go use he bathroom. The door was locked and he heard a muffled cry and a man talking. He kicked the door open and he saw Kora unconscious on the floor. He punched the guy and picked up Kora and carried her out, unfortunately someone spilled beer all over them and he just put her in his car an drove her to his house, he had a friend get her car and drop it off at his house. He changed and then wondered how he should change her. Luckily his sister was coming and he made her change Kora into one of his shirts.
     
  15. And wolf I am on my iPod which likes I change my words