“Haa.. Aaaa.. Aaaaahhhhhh? Oh lordy. Lordy… Aaaaaahhhhahhhh… Loooord… Fuuuuuaaahhh?...” Eric was a mumbling wreck. How on God’s Earth could this have happened? What just happened? Louie tripped and fell. I bolted back towards him, I was just about to pull him up. Louie screamed after the thing crawling on the floor grabbed hold of his leg and bit down hard onto his left ankle, ripping it up with its teeth. Eric stumbled backwards instinctively away from it as fast as he could. The rest of them were catching up to Louie, but there was absolutely no way Eric could help him at all. He just stared in panic at Louie, watching him trying to kick it off him with his right leg but to no avail. Eric could see the horror in his eyes as the rest of them slowly approached him. Louie, his sad, desperate eyes glared at me, he didn’t want to go just yet. Louie saw his eminent death approaching but there was nothing he could do about it, the horde swarmed all around him. But he didn’t do anything wrong… “Goddamn it man, goddamn it all… Shit, Louie. We gotta get the hell outta here man! I feel horrible that it happened but goddamn we have to run now, seriously… Don’t bloody stutter and start moving, you wanna die like him here you piece of cra-” I can’t take pressure like this. All of this is wrong on so many levels. I just want to put him out of his misery, nobody should die like this. Why am I even thinking about letting him die? I can’t… I... I. I don’t… NO..! Goddamnit. GOD.. Daaamnit… “GODDAMNIT TERRY SHUT THE HELL UP! THEY ARE CHEWING ON HIM LIKE SOME… GOD… I DON’T KNOW, man… Oh god Louie I’m so damn sorry… Man…” Eric sniffled, his eyes were red and puffy. He was on the verge of an emotional outburst, trying as hard as he could to hold back his tears. “Louie… I’m so, SO Sorry MANohgod…” Louie, I.. Well he was one of my better buds. He was the first one to approach me, a friendly face on the first day I transferred to this school. It was supposed to be just a simple school overseas trip, why did this happen? My heart is really pounding incredibly hard, I seriously can’t take th- “HNERHRK! Fughhrkk! Hnkkk.. FUHH.. AAarrhhh RUN, you shiii… khAAaahhgkHHH-k-k-k..!” I could hear Louie gurgling on his own blood, the pain and agony in his screaming. I managed to bring myself together somehow and ran as fast as I could towards Terry. Terry was yelling at me from the entrance of the school hall. It was horrible, it was. Immediately after I ran in front of Terry, I slammed the doors behind us shut and slumped against them. I was gasping for air, I couldn’t take this kind of pressure. Even at a family funeral, I was an uncontrollable sobbing pile of emotional mess. “Terry, what the hell do we do now, man? I’m flipping my goddamn shit right now so hard…” “Crap, what the goddamn… Just happened in there ma-” “Goddamnit Eric shut up, please just shut up, aight?! Those things are godforsaken monsters, they kill and turn you into one of them, end of bloody story! You wanna “flip your shit”, go ahead man… Go ahead. You think this is easy on me or something, man?!"
My advice? Use paragraphs, and double space them. I stopped reading because it was too hard to. Right now, it just looks like on big block of text.