What Could Go Wrong?!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Jess5509, Jul 6, 2011.

  1. I walked up the school steps and sighed. "Another day in another hell hole." I reached for looming doors and yanked on the handle. Inside our school was like any other school. Desks, books, teachers, etc. But looks can be decieving. Ontenupous High isn't a regular school. It's a school for girls. Advanced girls with abnormal talents. My talent you ask? They call me Red. I've got fiery, red hair and an attiude to match. I am an excellent ops student. I've got what this school is trying to teach everyone else. The basics? Memorize. Devise. Disguise. Attack.


    My story writing has been slacking off  Yes. In your opinion it might be horrible. Please feel free to tell me! I've read horrible stories and yet the comments say excellent! If you like it, tell me. If you don't like it, tell me!

    Thanx, ]£$$

    (I NEED CHARACTERS!! Leave a description and an advanced talent. If you don't know one, Ill give you one)
     
  2. I'm glad you are back to story writing...This one looks like it will be good...so more plz Iit
     
  3. :D Ty 

    Lol I havnt been writing for so long my writing skills have faded 
     
  4. Me i wanna be in to but im a guy 
     
  5. I can put you in it 
     
  6. Omg so good jess i wanna be i it to
    Name:Elly or Kathy
    Long dark Brown hair
    Brown eyes but gold at times
    And i want a power lol
     
  7. Yikes! I'd like to apologise to sophieclairr because I just relized my story name sounds alot like your story name 
     
  8. I wanna be in it!! 
     
  9. can i be in it plz
     
  10. luke brown hair brown eyes and my ability can it be advanced musical arts becuz i liv playin instruments :lol: and im only 4'9 :cry:
     
  11. Long brown hair, brown eyes, Nyla!!!
     
  12. Your story is much better then the others.
     
  13. Dark long brown/black hair , very dark brown eyes, naturally tanned skin, 5'8 in height, slim but strong body- I do lots of exercise n gym n stuff :)
    Oh n I wanna b the bad guy
    N I don't care Wat clothes I were.
    But I can were short denim shorts n a nice t-shirt :)
    N I'm 18
     
  14. It kinda sounds like a school for assassins
     
  15. Diamond
    16
    Black hair blue eyes
    AboUt her: She's flirty , she will 'cuddle' if you want to with her , she is strong against enemies but won't resist boys
    Friends: she hangs around boys the most but she girls too
    Sister: Katalina
    Extra: She Is twins with Katalina
    She plays flute in the band and does metalshop she is great at singing and even working with metal and playing the flute and even great with flirting with boys and not resisting a 'cuddle'.
     
  16. She's a good guy
     
  17. Kandi-Ty so much! ^.^

    Nikolette- A school for assassins? I'm sorry I'm not familiar with that.... Story? If it Is I apologise  Im
    Making this up as I go. Sortve. The plot is already planned, but the details are made up on the spot :p
     
  18. Lol guys remember, this is a girls only school. I can fit at least 3/4 guys in. Hot_Em, I need a name. And the bad guy posistion is already taken. You can be one of the mean girls of the school :D
     
  19. YOU KNOW WHO I AM GIRLIE!!!! PUT ME IN THAT STORY!!!! please!!! I am loving it and can I go back in time and be an excellent gymnast? Idk why but I LOVE to be a proffessional gymnast cuz this sounds like a story that needs that skilllol I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUYY