Waiting For My Enemies

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyBunny (01), Nov 20, 2012.

  1. I know I've written a lot of stories and I don't finish them but I just love writing them. The next thing I know, I think that it's not what I wanted to write. So I'll probably keep going on this story. This story has a little bit of action and romance. It probably will have adventure too.  Sorry if there are any mistakes. I'm just going fast.. Sorry if the title sucks too. 


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    Alexander's PoV

    I shot Edward as I fell to the ground, scraping my shoulder and my shotgun falling out of my hands.

    "Shit!" I yelled, crawling to a bush and checking it out. Blood was badly falling out of my shoulder so I ripped out a piece of my shirt and put it on my shoulder, wincing. Edward was my enemy, who tried to kill me and my family for no reason. He was probably an agent whose mission was to kill us.

    As I was trying to get the blood flowing out of my shoulder, Edward came out of nowhere carrying the shotgun that fell out of my hands and was limping. He pointed the gun to me and smirked.

    "Any last words?" He said, chuckling evilly. My mouth started to open to say something but as I did, someone screamed and I saw Emily, my daughter, jumping on his back. Edward fired the trigger but he missed me by a mile away. He fell on shattered glass and he winced a lot!

    "That has to hurt you more than me scraping my shoulder," I stood up and started limping to where my gun was, pointing to Edward. Emily was shouting to me and after that, the last thing I saw was a blurry, black, Emily. She was shouting and waving to me. I also saw Edward trying to get up with glass on his chest. Then, I heard cars parking on the dirt and friends of Edward running to me.



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    I know there's not lots of details and stuff but this is just the beginning.  I promise, I'll probably put more information on the characters in the next update. Also the place. I talk too much. Please give criticism! 