Venom Lies (One-Shot)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Mar 20, 2013.

  1. This is sorta a one-shot. It doesn't make that much sense and the grammar is crap, but I feel like writing. I'm in one of those moods and writing is a way to express myself. It's really short.. Sorry. :3

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    Anger and lies
    Can only acheive so much
    Close your eyes
    Accept the crimson touch.


    Venom Lies

    The land above was crimson red, bleeding down to the cowering dirt. Scum. The sky formed a mouth, a twisted one at that, and let out a delirious laugh, dripping out it's fatefull venom. The dirt known as human writhed and tried to resist, but it was no match to the deadly droplets. One by one we fell at it's mercy; the sorrow devouring us from the inside till the outside was a hollow lifeless shatter.

    "Be gone, shallow creations. You don't even belong in hell," the deformed mouth cackled as the last of the pitiful existences fell through the cracks of their lies.

    So here we lay, as the insanity seeps in. Drowning in our mistakes; fading in our hypocrisy. Let them take over, let them win. Take our determination, our courage within. Just close your eyes, accept defeat.

    An ugly painting: a beautiful masterpiece.
     
  2. Ooh.  I love the description. But shouldn't "it's" be "its"? "Its" is possessive and "it's" is just "it is"…
     
  3. Yeah. Sorry. :3 And thanks. ^-^
     
  4. Just wondering, where is the "it's"? (I'm too lazy to read through it all. xD I'm only good at skim reading. :p)
     
  5. ~Dripping out "it's" fateful venom
    ~One by one we fell at "it's" mercy
     
  6. Thanks :D, and sorry again. I really need to proof read. >,<