A Crime In Mid Town Part 1 Shoots ring out in the night. You asked this a voice yells. You had to force my hand. A dark figure stands over a limp body. The sound of police sirens in the distance. The shadow runing off in to the darkness. Soon the a crime to be surrounded by cops and reporters. All of them asking why in there minds. Smith what do we have here? Well sgt. Burns looks like a shooting happened some time around 2am. We dont have a name yet but CSI is runing the prints. You got anything else for me smith? Yes sgt. The vic was shot 4 times 2 in the chest. Once i. In the upper in side leg and once in the left side of the head. The vic was on there back when we got here. From what we can tell the vic was still alive for all 4 shots. They died sometime later of blood loss. Great work smith keep me informed and get me that report from CSI as soon as it comes in. Yes sir sgt. Burns. There is more to come tell me what you think thank you for reading my work
It's alright, needs less full stops. Gramma is a bit off haha but after that I'm interested what will happen.