Prolouge: Fluid was running to my body, I dont know how I was created. I felt rustling sound around my whole body. Researchers surrounding me everywhere, Wires plugged around me scientific computers showing stuff I have never seen before. One thing I knew was that I was a clone. I gazed outside seeing the brand new day prepared for me. My schedule was ready to keep my body healthy to prevent "mechanical Problems". I always been a girl alone reading books and drawing. My name was Valilah, for short Ali.
I always sat in the corner, looking outside the window while other gossip about my personality. I always felt uneasy, but I chose to not listen to anyone. But before that, let me start on with my story. I ran down the stairs fluttering my eyes seeing other clones getting ready to be given to people with no or few daughters. It is obviously given to the wealthy people living in big mansions. "Code 35, Code 35. Please go to room 308 for inspection before given," A announcer said. I walked quietly went to a room with a foldable bed and lied down. "We will get one bag of "blood" and look out of any germs, Go to Kitchen #3," A scientist explained. I just closed my eyes, to not see fluid coming out. Just then a seering pain struck my arms after injecting the needle. "You are done," A guy said. I proceeded to the kitchen I was meant to go to. I got a tray and ordered some food, then I sat on a empty table and ate. I was in the middle of my breakfast when a guy came towards me. "Hey, I'm Code 36," He said. "35," I silently replied. "You speak less?" He asked. "Maybe." "So wanna be friends?" "Up to you, I'm just wanting to get a family and get out of this weird s-" "Ok, I say yes," He replies. I finsihed my salad and dumped my tray on a booth. "Until I see you again!" He said. "Oh, My name is Mason," He followed up. I quickly went out. "Oh and what is your na-" He tried to ask but he did not have a chance to ask me for I went out already.
This is a pretty good idea for a story.️ I would recommend proofreading to catch a few grammatical mistakes, and maybe adding a bit more description, but I like it so far.