If you want, I can give you criticism when you start writing, so you can improve your writing. Sorry I can't do a collab, but I'm looking forward to seeing your writing
Rough draft ---------------- I was walking down the hallway going to class I had my favorite class social studies. Everyone thinks I'm some dumb kid but they've never seen my grade. All A's and b's (C's here and there) I just act dumb because no one likes smart people. I got into class when I saw that Mr.Yellek wasn't here today but a new teacher was. He looked VERY strong I could see all the girls flirting with him because everyone knew he just graduated. I just sat there raising my hand to tell ppl stuff like the major Norse gods names and all that The teacher seemed to be glancing at me from time to time most ppl say I look amazing but I never believe them because I'm me and I look ugly.
Here's a big one! I hate it! It is the worst! I couldn't have hated it anymore! Hint hint: I hate SS but other than that.... AMAZING
YEESH!!!! I was eating dinner!!!! Okay, here's my criticism: Remember punctuation, a few spots are missing it. And spell out the words, like people instead of ppl. But great start!! I like it!!