Under the Covers [Rewrite] [Teaser]

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Royale30, Aug 28, 2013.

  1. "There's nothing that could possibly be more deliciously intoxicating than being in possession of something you should never have."

    He is very tentative in his touch, but it's there, and she knows it. She smiles at him, pleasantly surprised. His hand is brushing hers, a virginal move, but a step in the right direction. He places a chaste kiss on her cheek, and her heart squeezes in on itself. He really does have magnificent eyes. They're almost inhuman, as pretty as they are. Guarded like a wild animal, but now glazed over, in a haze of something like lust.

    "You're such a virgin." She teases him, and he just looks at her doefully. It's his perfect opportunity to get something he's wanted, but been unaware of up until now, in this exact moment, where everything in him comes to life.

    "Maybe we should fix that, huh Sis?" He emphasizes the word, and she visibly shivers. His eyes meet hers, a nervous smirk on his face. His face is already blooming into an embarrassed flush. Can he really trust her like this?

    He has no other choice. The words have escaped his mouth. Maybe he's not ready, but backing out now is unforgivable. Unforgivable for the both of them, if the tent in his pants is any indication. He hesitates. Her face scares him. She's not blushing, but her eyes are bright and her mouth is a pretty, pretty pink. A slow, suggestive smile spreads across her face and the fire spills lower, slowly engulfing him into a raging inferno.

    She watches his face for a heartbeat, and she slowly leans forward. Her kiss is languid, stoking the flames. Her fingers dive into his hair, and his arm wraps around her waist, much smaller than it had been a few years ago. He wonders what it looks like under all of those clothes. His other hand cups her cheek tenderly, resisting the urge to simply pull her shirt up and look at her, nothing between them anymore. No more barriers. Just him, him and his sister. She drags her mouth away from his, leaving a tinglining sensation as she moves, and whispers softly into his ear, "Just follow my lead."


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    A RoyQin© story.

    Back at it again. A little taste of what's to come.

    Enjoy~
     
  2. me wants more... And first comment 
     
  3. OHMYGOD. I WANT.
     
  4. IT'S AWESOME ????A
     
  5. O.O Moar. I loved the original story, the rewrite should be even better!
     
  6. Interesting . Beautiful writing .
     
  7. Boring, dude get at my writing lvl LOL
     
  8. Tash, this story will be so much better. We've actually somewhat planned ahead (something we've never done in our co-writes), and made characters with depth. Not flat, perfect, lame characters. And a bit of an actual storyline. Woo? Woo.
     
  9. WHOOOOOOOOOO IT'S A PARTY TOWN UP IN HERE? 
     
  10. I'm probably making it sound better than it will be. Just the first time in a looong time I'm excited about a story.
     
  11. I AM SO EXCITED ;0 THIS IS JUST YES
     
  12. I'm glad someone else besides me is.
     
  13. THE WHOLE WORLD IS ARE YOU KIDDING ME THEY'RE JUST ASHAMED OF LIKING STOries like that because I think incest is illegal in some places :0 but it's still amazing and awesome and they secretly worship you in a secret altar at a secret time (aka alldayerday) at a secret place (aka everywhere they have a portable altar too) because this is just yes
     
  14. Oh please, you'll make me blush.

    And I dunno what it is. I seem to write incest stories somewhat frequently (at least given the amount of stories I've written here).
     
  15. BLUSHY BLUSH 

    Incest is fun to read. Actually most anything that's written well is fun to read.
     
  16. IT'S REALLY GOOD PLS UPDATE IT'S AWESOME IM EXCITED FOR THE NEXT UPDATE SOOO MUCH INCEST IT'S AMAZING BRAVO 
     
  17. Hey Royale! It's great to see this is back! :D
    Bump!
     
  18. Woot woot.  Fantabulous babes.
     
  19. Yay. How I missed a Roy and Qin story.
     
  20. Woo indeed.

    I'm pretty sure incest is illegal here in England 

    Would you say you have an affinity for incest stories, Royale?