I'm bored so I'm writing a story. Never written much before but I'm gonna try. Not rally sure what to write but here goes nothing... I was just laying on the beach in my red and black stripy bikini feeling the warm sunshine on my stomach just minding my own business when... BAM. I felt something come crashing down on me and spray sand into my long brown hair. Gasping for breathe I push the jerk who has fallen on me off onto the sand. "Look where you are going jerk"I yell angry at the blonde haired tanned guy that had fallen on me. "S...s....sorry I didn't mean too" he stutters as he get up. "yeah whatever" i yell Angrily As I get up and storm off. This story seems like a fail when I read it back I'll try make the next update better.
Ok soo the blonde hair guy that fell on her is Tayne. Oh and her name is Leah Tayne's P.O.V She was prefect. Well perfect in my eyes. She had long light brown hair and a amazing fit body. Her name is Leah. I no everything about her, she was botn on the 17th of june 1997 exactly two months younger then me. her favorite colour is blue, her favorite sport is netball, her favorite food is pizza... I could go on forever. Leah is the girl of my dreams. But yet there was one problem... I have been in the same class as her for 3 years but that was the first time she has ever acknowledged me and that was only bc I fell on her. Worst of all she think I'm a jerk... This can't get any worst. That was to try and describe the main girl Leah sorry it's not very great.
Still kinda unsure what I'm writing but I'm bored sooo.... Leah's P.O.V That jerk! I am raging! How dare he trip over me and get sand in my hair! But... Then again he did have amazing blue eyes and that dirty blonde hair. And wow don get me started on those abs. he's looks like a greek god!! It's too bad I have my boy friend jake. But I just can't get him out of my head.. His sweet manly voice. He seems so familiar but yet I can't remember where u have seen the face.... I know it's a bit rough and short....
Umm I'm kinda skipping the rest of the day until Monday for school... it was Saturday Monday morning Tayne's P.O.V Why won't she notice me? I wonder while daydreaming in class. She is gorgeous. Leah should be mine not jakes "tayne tanning!" mrs Watson growls " please pay attention in me class or u can get out" "sorry mrs watson" I mumble back. Great how could this day possibly get worst. I open my book and start sketching. Starting with her hazel green eyes then her pale pink lips. Bringgggggggggggg!! The bell rings loudly marking the start of lunch. Leah's P.O.V Who is that guy from the beach and why can't I get him out of my head? Argh!!! I wish I had been nicer too him. And now I'm stuck in a stupid class room listen to a stupid teacher. Mrs watson was yelling at some kid. I turn to see who the poor kid is. Those blue eyes like a ocean and that dirty blonde hair... It's him! I am shocked and amazed. I can't stop looking at him. Reliving the moment at the beach over and over again. Bringggggg! The bell rings loudly marking the beginning of lunch. Good I think to myself time to meet him... But what will jake think?! Yeah I no its bad but I have no life at the moment... I think I'll just give up know one is reading this. Night anyone
Don't use emoji in you're stories, use spell check, don't abbreviate, other than that it's good, too short, but good
Tayne's P.O.V I walk towards the lunch room still thinking about Leah. "TAYNEEEEEEE!" oh no not her again! Not Shay. Argh why won't she leave me alone. I turn and see her with her disgusting bleach blonde birds best of hair and her smug look on fixed on her pimply cover cake face. "what do you what shay?" I asked rather annoyed. "ooooh just you and those hot abs of yours" remarks Shay. "just go away all right I don't like you! Not one bit!" I yell at her as I storm away. Smashing out the huge double doors I make my way to the gym time to shoot some hoops. I start firing my shots away, 3 pointer after 3 pointer, they all go in. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!" my shot misses as I hear a ear piercing scream coming from the locker rooms. I sprint of there as barge threw the door. "JAKE STOP IT!" I hear a familiar girl voice scream, "I don't want to!" I know I know my update my updates are short but I should hopefully be able to update more and finish this story quicker.