Two Sides, One Coin

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ChocolateThunder, Dec 28, 2017.

  1. I simply hate your very being.
    I don't want to call you a "B,"
    But I hope my words sting,
    Since you're so bogus, "honey."
    I switched to my Mario voice,
    Singing out, "girl, you left me."
    You ain't give me much choice.
    I tried to hold you down, girl.
    I swear I gave you the world.
    You where here when I was up;
    Never around when I was down.
    Gave me the sad eyes of a pup,
    Whenever I ain't....
    Memories too painful...
    I swear I can't...

    Thin line between love and hate.
    Can't even tell what difference is.
    Destiny is forever; that's just fate.
    Yesterday I was acting like this;

    I could have you speaking...
    In tongues like an incantation.
    Even if we ain't freaking...
    You notice every inclination.
    Through each deep conversation,
    We get closer and closer.
    We could be an inspiration.
    Relationships are a roller coaster,
    Ups and downs and accusation.
    We deserve a standing ovation.
    Shorty, I stay around you like,
    I'm permanently on probation.
    Being yo man is my occupation.
    Until we had a tragic situation...
     
  2. Something fictional, something new. All reasonable constructive criticism is welcome, even if it's not supporting me
     
  3. Thank you. It's appreciated
     
  4. Some good... some cringe... but better overall.
     

  5. I'm constantly working on it
     
  6. It’s paying off. Keep at it.
     
  7. Already knowing