These Scars are my story, so why are they all about you?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by X_Livi-is-dead_X, Nov 20, 2011.

  1. These scars are my story, so why are they all about you?
    What it's about:
    Ever since Danny (Danielle) was 5 and her mother died she has been an outcast. Her only friend is her kitten Barney. Girls bully her and hate on her. She cuts herself. She has the scars to show it.
     
  2. (shoot it didn't let me finish the description)
    The scars are her story. But they are all about this one girl, Mandy.


    If you want a character in this story leave a description and name of them below
     
  3. Name: Lily
    Description: Red hair, Green eyes, caring and kind, Always friendly, helpful, and always random
     
  4. Angie Lester
    Blonde hair
    Dark eyes
    Helpful.


    Must know MOAR?
     
  5. Mercedes
    Long black hair
    Olive toned skin
    Tall
    Skinny

    Nice and sympathetic when her normal friends aren't around.
    Scared to voice her opinion if it's different from what's popular.
    Mean and sarcastic in front of her regular friends.
     
  6. Ohh forgot something from mine
    has a british (london) accent.
     
  7. Danny's POV

    I woke up, 6:55. I'll be late for school, again. I stood up, showered and blew dried my black hair. Today was picture day.
    Lily, the most popular girl in high school, ALWAYS made sure I had a horrible picture. Since pictures are 6th period, right after Sophomore lunch, Lily had the perfect chance. Last year I wore a white shirt that was BRAND NEW, lily took the schools chocolate milk and poured it over my head. Not only was I sticky for the rest of the day, but my white shirt turned brown.

    I got on my bike and road to school. This year I will hide these scars and make sure Lily doesn't ruin my year. I pulled into the schools parking lot, Lily stood there and threw OIL on me, laughed and walked away. I was on the break of tears. I ran into the gym locker room, showered, and used my extra clothes in my locker.

    "I HATE YOU LILY!!!" I yelled.
     
  8. (yeah I changed your personality lily. I have a bad memory)
     
  9. I needed a popular girl to make the title work with the story
     
  10. (Hahaha oh well I'm sure I'll get what's coming to me haha ;) )
     
  11. Lily you have so much heading your way.
     
  12. (Oh joys hehehe BuMp in that case)
     
  13. I walked out of the locker room brushing my hair. I saw Lily, Mercedes, and that popular crew. I quickly walked to my locker.

    "Hey girls. Look, it's Little miss motherless" Mercedes said. I sighed. "What do you want Mercedes?" I replied. "I was going to invite you to the Parent daughter dance but since your dad is always drunk and your mom died you can't go" she said in a snarky voice. Thats it.

    "SHUT UP! What if your mom died! YOU ACT LIKE IT'S ALL OKAY! JUST STOP BEING A [censored] AND THINK BEFORE YOU SAY!" I yelled. They were shocked I yelled back. "It's okay. Just keep cutting yourself" Mercedes said. I really hate them. Maybe I can get back at them.
     
  14. I've gotten silenced twice for bypassing i say "[censored]"
     
  15. hehe lol yayy I didn't say anything bad phew!
     
  16. Lily, your her 1st target xD
     
  17. Yeah on time I got censored for typing "b****" including the *