there once was a girl...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lindsey1414, Aug 21, 2013.

  1. There once was a girl who fell hopelessly in love.
    There once was a boy who had no idea.
    There once was a text describing how she felt.
    There once was a lie telling her he felt the same way.
    There once was a girl who believed him.
    There once was a date where everything was amazing.
    There once were two hands that intertwined perfectly.
    There once was a cheek that tingled when he kissed it.
    There once was a goodbye where no one wanted to go.
    There once was a girl who went home feeling beautiful.
    There once was a day when she realized he was lying.
    There once was a day when she truly felt pain.
    There once was another girl who stole his heart from her.
    There once was a text that she was never able to send.
    There once was a girl who couldn't tell anyone what she was feeling.
    There once was a smile that no one knew was fake.
    There once was a room that she spent days in doing nothing but crying.
    There once was a picture that she wanted to burn.
    There once was a boy who had absolutely no clue.
    There once was a girl who got worse by the day.
    There once were emotions that she couldn't control.
    There once was insecurity that she constantly felt.
    There once was a pillow that caught all of her tears.
    There once was time when this girl felt like nothing.
    There once was a girl who loved.
    There once was a girl who longed to be loved.
    That girl is no longer.

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    Hey there. I'm not exactly sure what this is but ya know I thought I'd post it and see what people think. Please leave comments and shtuff. Kthanksbai.
     
  2. Lindsey?
     
  3. Thanks you! And YES. IT IS I. I HAVE RETURNED. Haha
     
  4. Welcome back!
     
  5. . Your repetition of "there" makes it so intriguing . Lovely, lovely poem with beautiful, beautiful writing .
     
  6. ...And the feelings of every teen girl have been perfectly described. Lol
     
  7. Haha thanks everyone!  and it's good to be back.